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::A Crazy Love Story ~ Chapter 10::


Author: one_sour_cookie
Title: The Angelic Devil + The tall clumsy clueless guy + Hyperactive Bunny man + The stone face piano man + The protective smart guy = A Crazy Love Group
Pairing: JaeMin, YooMin, SuMin, HoSu
Rating: PG-13
Warning: uhh......
Summary: A Crazy Love Story - It starts out as... JunSu likes YooChun but YooChun likes Changmin so JunSu finds someone else *cough*Yunho*cough* . JaeJoong likes Changmin and is trying to get Changmin in the same bed as him and then JaeJoong and YooChun find out that they both are in love with the youngest and clueless member and they begin to compete. And then there is...Everyone is starting to get attracted to Changmin and then an accident [not a car accident] occurs where Changmin loses all of his memories and is having a hard time remembering whatever anyone told him. Who will win Changmin's heart? What will happen to Changmin? Because you never know...



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Everything is so warm......
Changmin felt something wrapped around him. What the hell is that?
Changmin's opened his eyes. He blinked a few times. His eyes widened, he couldn't believe what he saw.
"GAH!!!" Changmin pushed away from the sleeping man. "WHAT THE HECK!!!??" He pushed back to the other side of the bed but he was stopped by something. His legs were entangled with the other mans legs. 

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY BED!!!??"
His arms reached out and grabbed Changmin. He took him in his embrace. Changmin stuggled as he rappidly turned red. WHY IS HE IN MY BED!!?? WHY WERE WE SLEEPING TOGETHER!!??
His eyes fluttered open. He smiled.
"Good Morning."
"WHA--"
"It's really nice to be greeted first thing in the morning by 'GAH!'. Eh, Changmin?" 
Changmin looked down and blushed.

"Sorry." he muttered.
"It's ok." With those two words, everything came flooding back. The crying, the banging, everything. Changmin looked up.
"I--"

BANG!!! BANG!! BANG!!
" I KNOW YOU ARE AWAKE!!! COME OUT AND FACE ME LIKE A MAN!! LEAVE MY CHANGMIN ALONE!!" JaeJoong screamed.
"SHUT UP JAEJOONG!!" Changmin heard a slap. "Changmin? Are you ok? Can I come in?" YooChun lightly tapped the door.
"DON'T YOU DARE SLAP ME!!!"
"Well I did!"
"DEAD MAN!!"

He looked at Changmin.
"You want me to leave?"
"No." Changmin moved closer to him. Changmin dug his face in the older man's chest. "Don't leave. 'Cause you might let one of those guys in, since your not that coordinated, like me!"
"Oh, gee, that makes me feel wonderful that I stayed."
Changmin smiled and shut his eyes.
He softly laughed looking at Changmin. 

He watched Changmin for the past 2 hours when Changmin woke up.
"Good Morning, Again."
"GAH!!!" Changmin, again, pushed away from the older man. "WHAT THE HECK!!!??" Changmin blushed when he found his legs were entangled with the other man's. 

"WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY BED!!!??"
"Is this a cycle or something?"

BANG! BANG! BANG!
"GET OUT OF HIS ROOM!!!!"
"CHANGMIN!!?? ARE YOU AWAKE!!??"
"MOVE YOOCHUN!! I'M GONNA RAM DOWN THE DOOR!!"
"LIKE YOU CAN!!"

"Knew they would be at it again sometime." He scratched his head.
"Nice hair." Changmin smirked.
"Yours isn't any better."
"...."
"Got you there."
Changmin looked at him. Even though that was the guy that comforted him, he still had something that bugged him. He really didn't enjoy sharing the same bed. It felt weird. Very umcomfortable.
I got to get this guy outa my bed. Bingo.
"What time is it?" He turned his head around to search for a clock. Changmin grinned evily. Changmin pushed him out of his bed.
"ACK!!" But Changmin, the idiot, forgot one thing: Their legs still tangled with each other.

"AUGH!!" Changmin went down with him.
THUD!!

BANG!! BANG!! BANG!!
 
"I HEARD A THUD!!! WHAT THE HECK WAS THAT!!??"
"What happened to ramming down the door?" Changmin heard the smugness in his voice and saw him smirk.
"SHUT UP!! WANT ME TO USE YOUR HEAD!!??"
'Like you could."

"Um..." Changmin was laying on top of him. "Could you like....retract your legs or something?"
He chuckled "Sure." They both got up, flushed, and looked at the door with fear. "You want to go first?"
"No way. They'll eat me alive." Changmin grabbed his hand. " At least this way," Changmin raised their entwined hands "They can kill both of us."
"Loving the plan."
"I knew you would." Changmin leaned over and kissed him.

BANG!! BANG!! BANG!!
"I'M HEARING KISSING!!!!"
"SHUT UP, JAEJOONG!! YOU'RE GIVING ME A HEADACHE!!!
"SO ARE YOU!!"

"Guys?" Changmin whispered. 
Everything went quiet.
"Yes?" came two sweet voices.
"Shut up." Changmin said trying to stifle a laugh.

"WHAT!!?? HOW DARE YOU SAY THAT TO YOUR ELDER!!! Even though you sounded adorable~~~!"
"CHANGMIN!! DON'T YOU DARE SAY THAT TO US!! YOU'RE NOT THE ONE WHO SPENT THE WHOLE NIGHT SITTING OUT HERE!!! WHILE YOU AND THAT JERK SLEPT WITH EACH OTHER!!!!!!!!" YooChun yelled kicking the door.

"You guys are going to break my door."
"That's the signal to stop." The older said smirking.

"YOU SHUT UP AND GET OUT HERE AND FACE ME LIKE A MAN!!!!!"
"Nah."
"WHAT!!?? I AM YOU'RE ELDER!!!" JaeJoong started to punch and kick the door. "YOU DO NOT SAY THAT CRAP TO ME!!!! YOU LISTEN AND RESPOND!!!!"
"Hey Changmin."
"Yeah." The two inside the room were grinning and stifling the laughter.
"You wanna have sex with me?"
"Sure."

"WHAT!!!!???"
"SHIM CHANGMIN!!! YOU GET OUT HERE RIGHT NOW!!!!!!! YOU ARE NOT LOSING YOUR FRIKKIN' VIRGINITY!!!!!!!!" YooChun screamed getting up.
"I gotta lose it some time." Changmin held his stomach from the silent fits of laughter.
"NO YOU ARE NOT GOING TO DO IT WITH SOME SCUMBAG LIKE HIM!!!!" JaeJoong got up and braced himself for the blow. YooChun and JaeJoong both got ready to ram the door with their shoulders.

"Ready?" Changmin whispered.
"Yeah."
They opened the door and the jealous idiots came running into the room.
Changmin and he ran through the door laughing. 
YooChun and JaeJoong collided with the wall.

Changmin and he ran into the  kitchen where JunSu was looking hungrily at a chopstick.
"Hey--"
"YOU BASTARD!!!" JaeJoong and YooChun came running down the stairs. "GET BACK HERE!!!!!"
"Gotta go--"
"YOU AREN'T GOING ANYWHERE WITH CHANGMIN YOU BASATARD!!!" YooChun grabbed his shoulder and turned him around.
"ASS HOLE!!!" JaeJoong swung his fists at Yunho.

"DON'T HURT HIM!!!" Changmin jumped infront of Yunho and hugged him. "Ow...." He winced when JaeJoong punched his back.
JaeJoong's eyes widned and a horror struck face replaced his angry one. "CHANGMIN!!!! I'M SO SORRY!!!" 
"YOU MORON!!" YooChun yelled. 
"You guys are very loud." JunSu said scratching his head with the chopstick.
"I--" All three of them shouted.
"I'm sorry, JunSu." Changmin said smiling.
"Eh?" 

"I wanna eat~~~!!!" JunSu whined and hit his fist on the table.
"So do I." Changmin started to walk to JunSu like completely nothing had happened. 
"Chang--" Yunho reached out to grab Changmin's arm.
"YOU ARE NOT TOUCHING HIM!!!" YooChun and JaeJoong both screamed. The ran to Changmin and both of them put one arm under one of Changmin's arms.

"YOU'RE THE ONES WHO MADE HIM CRY!!!" Yunho grabbed Changmin's legs and pulled.
"SHUT UP!!" They pulled Changmin back and forth like tugga war.
"Oww! Yes it hurts!! I kinda DON'T WANT TO BE PULLED APART BY JEALOUS IDIOTS!!"
They let go and Changmin crawled away into a corner.

"THIS IS YOUR FAULT!!" JaeJoong pointed at Yunho.
"WHAT!!??"
"IF YOU HAD LET CHANGMIN GO THEN--"
"THEN WHAT!!?? MADE HIM CRY AGAIN BY HAVING FRIKKIN' SEX WITH YOOCHUN INFRONT OF HIM!!!??"
"HEY!! I WOULD NEVER HAVE it WITH THIS THING!!!!" YooChun pointed to JaeJoong.
"OH REALLY!!! WHAT IS SO BAD ABOUT ME THAT YOU CALL ME A 'THING' !!??"
"OH HO!!! DON'T GET ME STARTED!!!"
"I WON'T!!!"
"BOTH OF YOU ARE A BUNCH OF HORNY IDIOTS!!"
"I AM NOT!!!" both of them screamed. They looked at each other.
"STOP THAT!!" they said at the same time again.


Off in the corner where Changmin crawled into...

JunSu knelt beside Changmin, who was curled up in a ball.
"Hey." JunSu poked Changmin's head with his chopstick. "Hey." He poked him again. "Are you breathing?" He poked him again.
"No. I'm dead. So leave me alone. I'm tired."
 Changmin's eyes snapped open. *poke* "How can you be tired if you are dead?" *poke*
"I can do that. I'm very talented. Stop poking me with that thing" *poke*
*poke* "No." *poke* "Way." *poke* "This." *poke* "Is." *poke* "Too." *poke* "Much." *poke* "Fun." *poke*

"STOP IT!!" Changmin snatched the chopstick and snapped it in two.
"You broke my chopstick!!"
"Aww. What a loss." He said sourly and closed his eyes.
"HA!" JunSu pulled out a chopstick from his pants. "Got another one!! Nah Nah! Haha!!" JunSu was waving infront of Changmin's face.
Changmin, without even opening his eyes, snatched the chopstick and broke it.
"Got ANOTHER One!! Muhahaha!!" JunSu pulled out another chopstick.
Changmin broke that one.
JunSu pulled out a new one.
Changmin broke that one.
JunSu pulled out another one.
Changmin broke that one
and the next one
and the next one
and the next one
and the next one
and the next one
and the next one
and the next one
and the next one
and the next one
and the next one.

Until there was nothing left to brake.
"JunSu." came an irritated voice. "Did you just brake every single one of my chopsticks?"
"IT WAS CHANGMIN!!!" JunSu started to run. JaeJoong ran after him screaming horrible things he would do to him. Changmin quietly slipped away upstairs while Yunho and YooChun were still bickering.

He went into the bathroom and ripped off his clothes. He felt dirty. He turned on the water and stepped into the shower. He grabbed the shampoo bottle and poured most of it in his hand. Half of the shampoo slid off his hand and on the floor. He rubbed the shampoo his hair and stopped. He started to think about Yunho. Sleeping. In His Bed.
"Crap."

He started blush and his body seemed to burn up.
He turned around and cooled down the water. He turned back and he slipped. 
His one foot stepped on the extra shampoo and he lost his balance. He fell backwards into the wall. His head collided with the handle for the water. 
His head was leaning against the wall and he was in a sitting position, unconscious.  With the water still running. Cold Water.

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"JAEJOONG!!! I AM SOOO SORRY!!!" JunSu and JaeJoong were wrestling on the floor.JunSu tried to squirm away. He was clawing at the floor when he saw something white under the fridge. "Hey what's that!?"
"DON'T YOU TRY TO CHANGE THE SUBJECT!!!" JunSu reached under the fridge and found a piece of paper.

It said in Changmin's hasty handwriting:

Going out for a walk.
Cooling off.
I'll be home for the interview thing.

Leave me alone, Changmin.

JunSu read it outloud for everyone to hear. The kitchen went silent.
"CRAP!! WE HAVE AN INTERVIEW TODAY!!??"
"WHAT!!??"
"HUH!!!??"
"WHAT THE HELL!!??"

All four looked at each other with wide eyes and one thought in their mind: Bathroom. They all started to run towards the stairs and they rammed each other into the walls and pulled each others legs. Then they all finally made it to the bath room. JaeJoong triumphantly grabbed the handle first and grinned. Everyone else glared and muttered random things under their breath. He turned the doorknob.

 It was locked. 
"Well? At least open the door." YooChun said tapping his foot.
"It's locked."
"What?"
"It's locked." He felt something cold under his feet. All four of them did. They looked down to see water slowly seeping out of the bathroom.

"Who's in there?" Yunho asked. Everyone froze.
"Changmin..."

BANG! BANG! BANG!
"CHANGMIN!!! OPEN UP!!!" JaeJoong screamed.
"That won't work." Yunho pushed JaeJoong aside and he and YooChun rammed the door with their shoulders. It opened and more water came flooding out.

"What the?!" JunSu and YooChun ran over to the bath tub. 
"Oh...My...God..." JunSu stared. YooChun backed into the wall, wide eyed, and just stared. Yunho ran over to see what they were staring at. He stared too. Shock took over his body.
"What?" JaeJoong whispered.

He walked over and gasped.
"My...Minne...."
Changmin was lying on the bath tub floor. Eyes closed. His red lips now turning blue. His tan skin now white. With little traces of blood coming out of the back of his head.

JaeJoong was scared. But he needed to do something. Don't be dead. PLEASE don't be dead. He started to cry when yelled.
"WHAT ARE YOU DOING JUST STANDING THERE!!??" JaeJoong reached into the ice cold water and put his hands under Changmin's head and pulled it upward as fast as he could. 
"YUNHO!!"

"Y-Yeah?" 
"CALL 911 OR SOMETHING, GODDAMMIT!!!!!" JaeJoong started to struggle as Changmin's legs wouldn't come out of the tub. "JUNSU!!"

"Y-Yes?"
"GET SOME BALNKETS!! A LOT OF THEM!!!! WE CAN'T KEEP CHANGMIN FROZEN LIKE THIS!!!!"
"Ok." JunSu ran out the door. YooChun was still frozen, backed up against the wall. He didn't even have a thought. He just stared at Changmin.

JaeJoong cried as he did mouth-to-mouth. 
"C'mon, Changmin." tears blinded him as he pushed his fists on Changmin's chest and he went back down.
He lifted his head. "Breath, Dammit."
On the fourth try Changmin started to cough up water. Hope started to grow in JaeJoong. 
"Very good. C'mon." 

JaeJoong dipped his head back down.
This time, Changmin coughed up a lot of water but he wasn't breathing. He didn't say a word, it wasn't good enough.
"They're on their way, JaeJoong." Yunho came running in out of breath.JunSu came in with blanket and JaeJoong wrapped them around Changmin. JaeJoong, he didn't know how but he did it, scooped up Changmin and started to walk down the steps as he heard sirens.

"Keep on breathing. Keep trying. C'mon. You can do it." Changmin was constantly coughing up water. JaeJoong was getting more frustrated and worried by the second.
"CHANGMIN!!! BREATHE!!!" 

JaeJoong started to cry again. He heard people come barging in and take Changmin from his arms. They put him on a stretcher and ran away. JaeJoong collasped on the floor and cried.


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It was quiet in the car. The four of them were driving to the hospital. They had recieved no news about Changmin. Yunho tried to get JaeJoong to stop crying and tried to get YooChun unglued from the wall and get JunSu to stop muttering things about death. Everyone was pale and they were all worried and they felt like crying.
All of them were looking out the window in silence. They finally reached the hospital. They all silently got out and walked up to the receptionist. Yunho talked to her while everybody else was looking like they were dead.

"He's in room 066"
"One number away from...." YooChun whispered
"The devil's number which...." JunSu mumbled.
"makes us worry more...." JaeJoong finished.
"What's with all this finishing each others sentences?" Yunho tried to be optimistic and smiled eerily.

"Why do..."
"You even..."
"Care?"
" 'Cause it's--Here it is."
Yunho opened the door. He walked in and left YooChun, JunSu, and JaeJoong in the hallway. Yunho froze and then he walked in all the way, slowly. The three were confused.
The three walked in to see a smiling Changmin. Most of the color was in his skin was back but he was still pale. He was sucking on a lollipop.

"Wha??!!" all three of them screamed.
Changmin grinned and waved. They were all relieved.  "Hello!" 
"Are you ok Changmin?" YooChun asked with a confused look on his face. He didn't respond. "Changmin?"
"Are you talking to me?" Changmin said.

"No duh. Did you lose IQ points with that fall?"
"What? What fall? Are you crazy? Crazy people look funny though." Changmin started to laugh.
"Are you stupid?" YooChun asked with a 'jokes over' look.
"That's mean. You're a mean person! I don't like you!!" Changmin pouted and crossed his arms.

"Minnie?" JaeJoong walked forward. He put his hand on Changmin's cheek.
"Are you calling me a girl mouse?Why are you touching me?" Changmin said looking at JaeJoong. JaeJoong gently put his hand down.
"Changmin? Are you ok?"
"Why is EVERYONE calling ME CHANGMIN?!"
"Because its your name."

"It is?"
"Yes it is." JaeJoong couldn't help but smile, he thought Changmin looked adorable with a lollipop in his mouth and the way he acted like a child.
"You're a pretty ulgy-ish girl." Changmin said grinning.
"Uh...Oh..."
"What?" JaeJoong said shocked and starting to get mad.

"You are a very pretty ugly-ish girl."
"JaeJoong. Calm Down. Don't hurt Changmin." Yunho said cautiously. He walked up to JaeJoong. JaeJoong's eye started to twitch.
It was one thing to call JaeJoong a 'pretty girl' but when you called him 'ugly' girl or boy, you better run and hope that he doesn't have anything sharp or something that could harm you.

"And to think I SAVED YOUR ASS!!!" Yunho grabbed JaeJoong and lifted him off the ground. 
"Nah Nah!" Changmin stuck his tongue out at JaeJoong. "Ugly Girl~!! Ugly Girl~!! I See A Ugly Girl~!!"
"I can agree with that." YooChun said smirking.

"Who's the freak with the short hair that looks like a stupid idiot?"
"WHAT!!??"  YooChun screamed with his eyes bulging out of his head. JunSu laughed.
"You sound like a dolphin." 
"Th--"
"And you have a big butt." Changmin said pointing at JunSu. Yunho started to laugh. YooChun and JunSu were fighting each other to see who would kill Changmin first.

Changmin looked at Yunho. Yunho smiled. He knew that Changmin would never say anything mean to him. Plus he new that he was perfect.
"You look old. Like my Grandma! Except she looks prettier and her hair looks real, yours looks like a wig. Is it a wig?"
JaeJoong, YooChun, and JunSu all laughed.
"You little brat."

All four of them were fighting each other to get to Changmin first while Changmin just sucked on his lollipop.

-End-

Hello! Just had to have JaeJoong save Changmin! Just had to! Sorry this Chapter had to be depressing!!! But its all gonna be happy from now on! I'm just saying....That this fic will be over soon! Just saying!
 

Comments

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chang_mina
Mar. 30th, 2007 10:30 pm (UTC)
Am I first??
I was waitingfor this chapter :) This guy was Yunho ^_^ Heh..Yhey look now as brothers :)i like this chapter,especially the ending :) Changmin with lolipop xDDDDDDDDDDDDD I should see this xDDD
Buuuuuuuuuu..I don't wanna this fic to be over soon :( that will be sad :(
one_sour_cookie
Mar. 31st, 2007 04:01 am (UTC)
Congrats! You're First!!
I know...But it has to end sometime!
forgive me!
jangwoohyuk35
Mar. 31st, 2007 04:59 am (UTC)
That was so cute!! I love it when Minnie acts like a little kid!! LOL...He sure made his hyungs mad! I loved it!! I wish Yoochun hadn't frozen like that while Changmin was unconscious...it would've been awesome if he had saved him....oh well, Jae would've been my 2nd choice...hehe
one_sour_cookie
Apr. 3rd, 2007 12:39 pm (UTC)
lol
I know! Poor Chunnie was so scared. I kinda felt bad that jae was the bad guy so I just chose him to be the hero!! YAY!!!!
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one_sour_cookie
Apr. 3rd, 2007 12:42 pm (UTC)
Hey! Thats my line!
kidding!
*gives you tissue* Sorry! but its gonna end sooner or later!
I think its gonna be hard to find out who kills Changmin and all ecause or the next chapter.....I'll stop there. heehee
^^v
theresa_lynne
Mar. 31st, 2007 07:26 pm (UTC)
Man, this story is just getting weirder and weirder. Haha. Thanks for updating again. I'm glad it was Yunho who comforted Changmin... and Jae saved Min. Yay!!!

Can't wait for the nest part. ^____^
one_sour_cookie
Apr. 3rd, 2007 12:47 pm (UTC)
I know! Isn't the best part is that it's weird?!
THANKS FOR THE AWESOME COMMETN!!! *hug*
karnaysion
Apr. 1st, 2007 05:37 am (UTC)
lol I was ready to be sad when Changmin got hurt but then the hospital scene came and i couldn't stop laughing
the story is getting weirder, but in a good way
hope it will not end soon, this story is awesome, such a stress-reliever...
one_sour_cookie
Apr. 3rd, 2007 01:10 pm (UTC)
I know! Isn't it great that it's weird! That way I can come up with anything and just stick it in there!!!! Yay Me!!
It won't end soon....But it will have to end sooner or later!!
It's a stress reliever??
unnamedangel
Apr. 1st, 2007 05:37 am (UTC)
Thank you so much for updating!!!!
I love the part when Junsu is poking Min and Min is breaking all the chopsticks. I can imagine it pretty well [after lots of clips of hyper Junsu]

What? It's gonna be over soon??? Noooo I want more of this.... T_T
one_sour_cookie
Apr. 3rd, 2007 01:11 pm (UTC)
Sorry! BUT IT'S GOTTA END SOONER OR LATER!!!!
But it won't end for about.....a long period of time!
arisu_22
Apr. 1st, 2007 09:09 am (UTC)
THE FUNNIEST CHAPTER I HAVE EVER READ(except the part where they wouldn't stop fighting and Changmin almost died sooo not funny.I know I shouldn't have laughed at this part but "..and get JunSu to stop muttering things about death." I just found that part so funny! I just get the weirdest image in my head when I read that....but yeah I luff your writing <3333333
one_sour_cookie
Apr. 3rd, 2007 01:13 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
You thought that was funny??!! You serious? What image are thinking about???
Aww! Thank you! *gives you hugs*
cupcakezoo
Nov. 24th, 2007 04:24 am (UTC)
it was yunho!!! ::gasp::
HOMIN IS SEXY TOO!!!

and Min doesn't remember anything!!!?!!!
OMG!!

*runs to min in his state of vulnerability of takes advantage of him* i'm ur luver! and u luv me and totally want me! but not as much as u said u wanted jaejoong, yunho, junsu, and yoochun! and you said i could record y'all doing it!!!! and then u said u'd marry me!
one_sour_cookie
Nov. 25th, 2007 10:42 pm (UTC)
Bwahahahaha!
Heck yeah they are!!

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ohmygod! I can't stop laughing!!!
dongbangnie
Nov. 27th, 2007 03:05 pm (UTC)
haha now its all a mess
one_sour_cookie
Dec. 2nd, 2007 12:22 am (UTC)
Muahaha!
This is where the real fun begins!
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